wtf

wtf

not bad one

that was an alright animation. a little bit random overall, but it was nice for a first animation. i think that you have some decent potential.... work hard on your flashworks and you could have a portal award in no time.

It was ok, but needs some work.

First off, I don't perticularly care for this type of animation (where live action is mixed in, much less when it plays the predomenant role). With that being said this wasn't too bad.

The animation was ok as were the drawings, both however need improvement.

At one point or another it looked like you were trying too hard to make your video funny, but on the other hand you did a better job at acting than most who try similarly styled animations.

You're on the right track, just keep working on it and I'm sure you could do very well :)

You're going to have awful heartburn

Well I would've like more animation on the ninja's part and MUSIC! You need the karate movie music!

It's ok but not all that brilliant.

Ok. You said Constructive crtitsism. But as the last reviewer said it is a bit hard. The idea of fighting ninjas is pretty good. However it (sorry to say this) looked like you were a bit crazy. But the movie was ok considering it was your first. Keep trying. You'll be good some day.