that was good wish it was longer though
It was short. Okay. BUt you need to add more detail to it.
lol, that was great!
Man, those sound effects were priceless. Terrific idea, I'm glad to hear that there will be more to come.
lmfao did u lol? omfg, ftw!
its not that great of itself, but its a good introduction to the series.
wow, that was funny, though i didnt start laughing until after the last line, but i all was still funny. Too short though.
too short for what? too short for bhort? "BHORT"? who's he?