The story was intresting, grabbed your attention, but it was hard for me to follow.
I liked this though and was fun to watch.

Best I can figure for "Orphan Marble Pain" is "Unfathomable Pain". Do I win?

I love collecting the pieces of the puzzle, trying to think of some way all of this is tied.
Well done

Gotta say, my favorite part was almost definetly: "Of course it worked, of course it did." Like it's the most obvious thing in the world XD.
The whole thing captures the dreamsperience (portmanteau for the WIN) pretty well.
Keep up the good work man.

woah!

i actually got the messege! did anyone else?