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its a short flash i did to see how good i was stick figure animation i believe i did pretty well for a first timer. i hope u enjoy
that was a nice animation. a little bit short though, but it was cool to watch, very good for a stick animation, good audio, your efforts were quite nice, offered some decent entertainment and it was cool to watch.
You did a nice job on this. But some flaws were involved. First of all, the graphics were good, but needed to be improved upon. For example, try drawing the blood more smoothly, or less messy as it is. Try drawing it more like it would look like a puddle of some kind because the method you use to draw it looks somewhat "lacking" and "roughly done". Don't get me wrong, it looks nice, but try drawing it so it looks more realistic in terms of violence. I like the style of this. Found it to be quite original for it to be a stick figure animation. But since there is no storyline, it really deteriates it's value. Why did Gabrel become or why is he a vampire slayer? Who was that woman the vampire was sucking blood off from? Answer these questions and you have yourself a storyline. The music was very nice since it fitted the animation very well. The sound effects were good as well, but I didn't like the obnoxious scream of the woman you inputted. It would have been better if you would have left it out. There was plenty of violence, which is highly common in stick figure animations. Good job on that. Overall, you did an ok job the only thing that would make this submission better would be to add a storyline and make it much more longer. Keep up the good work and good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Good Graphics, Nice Style, Great music and nice sound effects, blood drawn roughly but looked ok, animation lacked storyline. short on length.
Not enough story
The animation and sound were fine but i found it to be a bit too short and lacking in the story department. Nice though.
It was neatly made, but somehow it was absolutely senceless. Just killing with much blood, nothing special. Try to involve some kind of story inside, just like he was hurriing to rescue his girlfiend, but she died or something. And invent some plausible dialogues.
Are you sure that's your fist flash?
One of the best things I've seen on the portal by far. Perhaps you could make a series out of it. Kudos
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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