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--::conspiracy::-- (ep.1)

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The beginning of serious cartoon series I'm starting.


Nothing is ment to make sense yet, but the next episode will explain most of the things that are going on. This one was mainly made to build hype for the rest of the series.

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Practice makes perfect.

Good effort, but I don't think this is going to pass. The art is somewhat choppy, there's a part where the sound skips, and the kid voice just won't do. You have a natural knack for it, so I would suggest that you keep practicing your artistic styles, and get a new voicer, and try again. Good luck.

im very sorry

i dont think that the people of NG will enjoy this movie much, sorry but good effort, better luck next time ;)

Well... its hard to say...

The storyline was great... but the graphics were pretty bad, I like the character design though, the voices sucked badly, I must say. It sounds like your a 12-year-old who used Audacity to deepen your voice. But I hope you improve in the next episode.

The artwork and effects need work

PM me if u want me to help out and make those explosions more realistic, and the artwork more believable.

EEhhHhh

that was an interesting plot line but the voices dident fit the charicters. You had a 12 year old sounding Soldier who "arrests" people.(soldiers arent police) And a convict who sounds like hes been hitting the bong from 2 years of age. But other than that cant wait till ep. 2!

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Dec 30, 2006
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