not as good as the first
it was ok, but defenitly not as good as the first.
i found that the voices didnt suit teh chracters anymore, especially Draeton and the smart one who i cant remember....
i think you should have spent a bit more time on it, you still have a few days till new year, so you might aswell have used them.
at the replay scene you couldnt hear what teh characters were saying because of the random guy constantly saying "replay!" whitch was just down right anoying.
there was only one joke actually on it, but you didnt really focus on it that mutch, maybee if you had actually shown Draeton as he was flying up saying something it would have added a bit more of a comical element.
in the next episode you should actually introduce the full storyline, because at the moment no one knows whats going on other than you and the few friends youv told, and maybee you should introduce the bad guys that were mentioned in the first? possibly though a battle of some kind?
what happened to the pause, play and all that lot?
how come when draeton was talking to the animator, it wasnt your voice talking? that would have made a bit more sence since you ARE the animator.
another thing i think would be really good to add would be if you actually drew them from diferent view perspectives, because in te way they move there heads ther paper thin!
dont get anoyed by me saying but i think the characters all look to mutch the same, if you edited the way the armour looks in places to give each character an individual look it would be mutch cooler, and even easyer to memorise there names.
non the less, it was still ok to say you barelt spent any time on it, less than a day infact.
oh, and just so you know. i dont mean any of those things in a bad way, more of a helpfull way.
c ya, Ben
p.s: You dont need to say "hi everybody. this is Will Ryan speaking!" in everything! its kinda anoying. since these are YOUR cartoona and YOUR website, you should plainly asume that it was YOU speaking!
p.p.s: done leeve so mutch time between episodes this time, i think that since this wasnt a full episode, just a special episode, you should make tbonrp3 next and actually get the story going (as i said above)
wow, thats the longest review iv ever written... this damn thing would fill up a Harry Potter book!