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Its been a long time since I last submitted. This is a semi-autobiographical story based on some of my boyhood memories. I used Toon Boom and Flash.
Background bitmaps were painted in Photoshop.
Thanks to all of you for your positive reviews and thoughtful comments.
I hate Percy
All the characters look like they smell bad and seem really annoying. I gained no respect for percy. But, I gave you a ten for story development animation and sound work. Good job
Im an honest reviewer, but that was the corniest, dryest, dumbest thing I've seen on newgrounds. The animation was fine but the storyboard and jokes were so horrible I'd rather put my willy in a pot of boiling tobasco then drip it in my eye ball. And it was far from heart warming considering the plot was so shallow, mundane, and unoriginal. I really hated the sound also. The voices were bad. Espicially the kids voice. Pathetic and weak and didn't sound like a kid. And the quality was horrible, I even watched it twice to make sure it was my speakers but it was just that you were horrible at it. Try harder next time tough guy.
How about that, folks! an HONEST reviewer. I suggest you take a look at this guy's Flash work if you want to get an idea what he knows about timing, drawing, color use, humor, action, movement, and anything else involved in creating quality work. The guy's a genius "HONESTLY".
What is there to say?
It was great - Nothing too outrageous, overwhelming; just a nice, heartwarming story. Nice.
I loved this, it was a great story, and a wonderful tribute of sorts. The only thing that bothered me is that none of them ever blinked. It seemed kind of odd.
Omg you are the new teacher brunswick, without the gay. don't worry thats a compliment. Anyway about your flash, it was amazing. The feel of it was like no other on newgrounds, the story wasn't per say amazing but it was good. The humor was very witty and I actually laughed out loud at some parts. The graphics were pretty solid but at some points weren't perfectly crisp. The animation was pretty good for the most part but things skipped to far between each movement sometimes. Also the sound was great, good voice acting and nice varied voices.
Excellent voice acting
A style like no other
~things to improve on~
Like i mentioned earlier the animation between each movement sometimes skipped too far.
Shading was odd at some parts.
It appears Alice is dead, and you might be the one who killed her.
Foamy likes to speak his mind about the things that piss him off!
These aren't your little kid's bed time stories! If they are, seek help!
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