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Stawell's broke!

rated 3.63 / 5 stars
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Dec 18, 2006 | 12:36 PM EST

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*edit* this is but the first of a multi ep story arch- yes it ends abruptly- but the story continues wit hthe next ep- coming soon! thanx for the front page too!----

Starwell is broke, and sees a commercial for "Chuck Noris' School of Financial Freedom!"

I've been gone for a while- I was taken off "Starwell" at work for a few months- but I'm back now. Area 51 is cancelled- due to the fact tht I got picked up by APE Entertainment to do an original comic called Scarlet Veronica m/preview -check it out. I'm still doing starwells because that's my day job.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Nice, but

No I know that you intended to make it end like that. But it was the biggest let of in your flash, just wait until you have the second part or something =S


Rated 3 / 5 stars

It's okay.

Bad Things.
1) when the Starwell is sitting on the couch, the couch is completly to the side and Starwell is in 3/4 view..
2) also, you misspelled Starwell in the title when you submitted it to NG.
3) pretty gay ending. it's like, "So just remember, if you light a smoke, you'll choke, so don't smoke ^_^" or, "Just don't spend more than you make" ..
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Good Things.
1) the story started out good
2) the characters are unique
3) although Chuck Norris is overused, it was a bit funny how you used him in this flash. "kicking debt in the crotch"
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So mate, to wrap it up, just work on these things, and you'll end up fine.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not again..

I really don't like this series, you try and teach a lesson at the end of every episode.
What's the point?I was happy when you killed off starwell and hinted at starting a new project but now I'm just disappointed.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

nice stuff dude!

if u havent already done so, make one of him getting drunk or something like that! he he! that would be funny!! peace!!


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great series

I love watching the Starwell series, I thought he was killed though and you were going to start on a new project. But anyway, it's a great short, keep up the good work!