Considering Your FirstFlash, very Good
This was a very good flash, obviolsey, its an idea taking from madness, but you state this and your ideas are good. I like the consistency of the text at the start...One "etc"...I think its a very good build up to the picture at the end. Although im not a fan of madness copies, just my opinion, but i can certainly make a exception for this flash, because an well drawn, well animated intro to what might be a brillaint flash in the future ;)
I've rated this 10 considering the conditions that your new.
Well done mate, a brillaint debut.
(Althought any more one Moments and i might of got bored)