Good day NG,
This is the pilot episode of The Unknowns. The Unknowns are plants that can talk and have weird adventures and so on. But the're stuck in the window because they don't have any legs obviously. Please give constructive criticism so the 2nd Episode can get better.
In this first episode Mr. Cakkies, a cranky german cactus, is slipping in to madness and tries to escape. Also Satan will make an entry in this episode!
Hope you enjoy, and theres more to come. Stay Tuned.
- Sinas
To infinity and beyond
Overall, a good first submission. It shows that this is a pilot but dont read this as a bad thing. Pilots are not mend to be extremely good, their just there to see if there is an audiance for it and Id say there is. Sound is sweet though the talking could be more fluent.
PS Im glad you chose for the angry austrian instead of the mexican :D Cant wait for episode 2.
angry german :) Thx for the review. The talking is going to be better next episode, if you watch it you'll see for your self :)
Alright..
I got to say it was pretty good, sorta awkward graphics style but I guess it works, I was impressed with the sound quality but you really need to spend more time writing the actual script then making the flash movie, take a look at like Metal Gear Awesome - it has pretty bad graphics and animations but it's script is amazing and that's why it's one of the funniest flash movies on newgrounds!
Don't take this review as a bad thing, just work on my advice and I promise you'll be on newgrounds!
Thanks for the review! This "script" if you can call it a script :) was real short because i wanted to see if people would like this idea. The second script will be much better! Thanks for the advice