:) :) :)
Everyone's a critic, but ii say good work. I could see and hear everything with no problem, and while yes it was short, as a hand drawn and scanned project i can tell it took awhile. good work
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not much to say other than it consisted of 306 hand drawn pictures that took about 35 hours to draw then 4 hours to scan and 3 hours of editing feel free to tear it apart or whatever any comments are openly accepted to further better my the next time I make one
Great
the only negitive were the grafics, withch combined with a bad title were -1, but the hand drawn and scan gave you pls a point.
okay
it was an alright animation. it had a nice idea to it and the graphics were good, but this one was very very short. i think that it could've been a bit longer overall and maybe more depth in the plot to it too. your efforts were nice in this one though, but i think that a little more could've been done.
Thats a nice start
I don't think that the title matches the movie(yeah, the ice-cream beated the bad guy :P, but he beated the BAD guy, and gave a new ice-cream to the kid :>), but thats just my opinion, and I wont decrease my rating because of that little "mistake".
++ The bad part of the flash ++
I barely could see what was happening, but i figured out what was the movie about after the second time I saw it.
Maybe you should use less zoom or something.
I know it can be frustrating, spending 35 hours drawing scenes, but the movie was short. Thats not necessarily a bad thing, and i appreciate effort, but for us, the viewers, it looks short. Maybe a little more effort. A flash movie shouldn't be made in hurry :P
A play and replay button! Thats a simple thing that you didn't add :P
++ The good part of the flash ++
One thing that I found interesting, was the colour of the ice-cream, because in fact, all the rest was black and white, but I found it rly nice.
One important fact, maybe the most important: You have Style!
Your movie reminds me that cartoons from the 1950~1980 years back, because the frames were always moving(I don't know if you did it on purpous, but it was really nice).
The way like the car stopped, and the way how characters act was rly nice, and in my oppinion you shoul develop that skill in your future projects.
Good try?
Graphics: I don't see how that took you 35 hours or whatever to draw. It was a very basic style and the quality of the actual movie was VERY low - it was difficult at times to see what I was even looking at.
Style: I guess.. It was okay? Short and to the point, that's for sure, but I didn't catch the point while I was trying to figure out what I was looking at.
Sound: The music was tinkly. I'm not pleased by tinkly music.
Violence: Wasn't any.
Interactivity: Wasn't any. Not even a play button, which would have been nice.
Humor: It was mildly amusing but nothing to laugh at.
Overall: Not impressed. You've got potential; put it to good use on another attempt.
DustyDiamands responds:
The reason it took roughly 35 hours is because of planing out each sequece and then scanning it to see if it will work. If not then you have to add more inbetweens and what not in regards to the situation. I also had to basically draw the images twice because I had to lay down the idea with the color red which you can see in it. then finalize it with black to make it stand out. As far as quality goes in how well you see it I apalogize for that if you could tell me where to get some tutorials on making play buttons and that other jazz I will do it and update it with better quality picture as well.