This was great!

It is obvious that you put effort into this animation. It was very well done. The style of the characters, (which were awesome by the way...) were very well done. The storytelling and plot was also great, which just endearly left me to give you a ten for style. Awesome style. What really made this animation shine was the main character's emotions. His emotions were very clear and vivid. Nice job on that. The music fitted the movie very well also. It went well with the sequence of the movie and conveyed the mood of the movie as a whole very well also. The categories (Violence, Interactivity, humor...) scores' are self explainable. Very, very well done. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your future submissons.

K

^^Good Points^^
I thought the neatest part about this is that you were able to create a storyline as you did and develope it quite nicely without the use of any voice overs and sound effects. It's really a quite unique technique. The graphics were pretty well done. You changed the camera a lot and had lots of god animations. I liked the music too, it set a good bar mood.

^^Needs Improving^^
I don't really like how you had to use such lame character drawings in this. I don't really buy the whole square for a head thing in this.

Great, I loved it

This is front page material. It was so professionally done. This would make a great series. Nothing needs to be re-done; this was perfect.
Penboy

well done

keep making more. I like the jazz BGM in this.

thought the girl was going to end up being a guy at the end.
nice and fluid and well timed.

pretty good

that wasnt short. kinda liked your style and the mood was very well set. all in all it was a good flash.