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Original Episode I

rated 4.15 / 5 stars
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Dec 7, 2006 | 1:45 PM EST

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The unfortunate demise of Mister Schmorey

Meet corey, a young redneck who excels in slacking and such. His life consist of sleeping, eating, drinking, and listening to Heavy Metal.
But today everything changes, when Corey gets hit by a huge truck..




Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Do you mean me or another 3D

Because I certainly don't remember helping you with a storyline. But anyway great art it's just amazing I can't wait to see this on the frontpage


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I dont think so

Are you kidding? People go to hell for crimes such as steal, rape, murder and such .... I don't see how listening to heavy metal and grabbing his own ass is a evil life that deserve punishment. In my words, the storyline's plot doesn't fit, unless you're in a sect or so...

Oh by the way, no text speaks of hell before the years 900. You should consider that it has been invented by humans probably as paradise to dictate population's way to behave. I'm not telling that we don't need lines to follow but mainly religion is a plot from men to control other men.

The movie was well done for the technical purposes, with the best point being graphics were very well drawn. Music's quality was good and maybe a little too much if you want the advice.

The 8 mb file size is excessive for the needs of that movie. You should somehow cut down on audio files sizes by the use of a audio-working program like audacity or the one you want, and then update the movie via your account options.


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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

looks promising

i like the art and animation here. one definite improvement would be to find a better recording method because the voice of peter was really low quality and hard to understand without subtitles, kind of like a walkie talkie or something. if you fix that, you'd have a pretty much sterling work on your hands.

also what is that song when he goes to hell? another guy commented on it, and ive had that song for years, but i dont know who made it. i think its an early deftones b-side, but the vocals dont sound quite the same as chino.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Awesome graphics.

However, your sound quality is, well, pretty crap actually. I've listed some things you can do to fix this.

- Download the free sound recording program "Audacity".
- In "Audacity", use the noise removal function to remove any unwanted fuzz or buzz.
- In Flash, go to publish settings, then the flash tab and change the stream and event sound quality to 54kbps or higher.
- Buy yourself a decent microphone.
- I also recommend making all your sound files mp3 format, it tends to clean them up, and make their size smaller. You can do this through "Audacity" or "Switch", both free for download.

I hope you take my advice into account! Remember, you don't have to do all of these things, just fiddle around with different combinations and see which works out the best.

Ryan Macaroni.

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Not Bad

You are a great artist, Very nice job, i liked it and will be waiting tor the future EP's.... Ohh it might be a good idea to put a replay button in future EP's 9 or did i just miss it Because i kinda closed it after a few seconds of the "Stay Tooned" Page)...

Other Then the It Was Pretty Good...