just work on it some more
This film was not that bad, like the guy above me said. My main problem was in the sound, it hurt my ears at some point and at others it was just jumbled sounding...making your viewers bleed from the ears is not one of the ideas behind flash, is it?
Anyhow, it was pretty well done, but it just needs some work, mainly the sound, and clean up some of the drawings.
Keep trying