its ok...

nice animation and pretty funny.
it couldve been longer though

(( HaHA ))

~~REVIEW~~
Haha this was funny, and yes it was very short, but i was impressed with the humor, it made me laugh, very good himor, and nice touch with the Subtitles, you should make a whole bunch on shorts like this and put them all together, anyways nice animation.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell.

~~OVERALL~~
A very short toon but also very funny nice work.

~X~

that happend to me once :)

This is pretty good, nice art style.

good

work on it, and it'll be a funny piece, I can't really tell you what to fix, as I don't make flash on here, but just make it better, and it'll rock. I still thought it was funny, though

Insert coin here

this wasn't so bad. now heres my list of criticism.

Pros:
1) the graphics weren't so bad
2) It was pretty funny
3) I can tell you put some effect into unlike [**] and [**]

Cons:
1) It was short
2) The audio had too much static

Suggestions:
1) fix the cons I listed
2) Don't use lines, trust me, it would make zooming/paning hard
3) add some music, or sound effects, some kind of white noise

what kind of person am I to say this stuff and havn't release a flash yet. lol