nice animation and pretty funny.
it couldve been longer though
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Haha this was funny, and yes it was very short, but i was impressed with the humor, it made me laugh, very good himor, and nice touch with the Subtitles, you should make a whole bunch on shorts like this and put them all together, anyways nice animation.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It was very short, so in that type of flash why not either add more content or you could make a flash with a number of short flashes like this one or even adding it as a part of some collab would be good aswell.
A very short toon but also very funny nice work.
that happend to me once :)
This is pretty good, nice art style.
work on it, and it'll be a funny piece, I can't really tell you what to fix, as I don't make flash on here, but just make it better, and it'll rock. I still thought it was funny, though
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this wasn't so bad. now heres my list of criticism.
1) the graphics weren't so bad
2) It was pretty funny
3) I can tell you put some effect into unlike [**] and [**]
1) It was short
2) The audio had too much static
1) fix the cons I listed
2) Don't use lines, trust me, it would make zooming/paning hard
3) add some music, or sound effects, some kind of white noise
what kind of person am I to say this stuff and havn't release a flash yet. lol