This is my first flash, but please don't let that sway your voting. This took me a month to complete, but that's mostly because I'm lazy and didn't work on it for awhile. And the music in the beginning is SUPPOSED to have bad quality because the song was recorded in the 1920's.
i didnt like this sorry
im voting it a zero not beacause of the flash but beacause of the things you said to rtil he puts up a hell of a better effort then you and makes his own custom sprites and puts an effort sure i like the music to his flashes but his sprites and smoothness on animation is great you could learn from him
That was pretty bad
but I haven't really made any cartoons, so.. A+ for your effort
What the hell was that
You know you should actually try to animate something before going around badmouthing other peoples work. You really are the most pathetic person ive ever seen on newgrounds.
wtf?
Dude the animation sucked, what music? Try it again, it has great potential
Not too bad for a first time...
All right, first off, you need to compress the music. Otherwise it'll result in huge file sizes, which nobody really likes. Also, a bit longer would be better. Some storyline would also contribute a lot.
All right, firs off, I don't know HOW to compress music. Also, this flash didn't have much of a plot other than random stupidity to begin with, so how could it be longer? And some storyling would have taken away from the randomness. Storyline flahes these days are so horribly done because the "stories" actually have less of a plot then the flash I have submitted here.