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Akuman the soul reaper

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This is the first episode of Akuman the soul reaper series. Your feedback and constructive comments will be highly appreciated. Please visit www.akuman.net for more Akuamn stuff. Enjoy!

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Good first submission
Graphics : 7/10 => didn't like them much but they were good for a first submission
Style : 8/10 => liked the "lucky guy"
Sound: 2/10=> poor sound try to find or creat a music next time
Violence:6/10=> poor guy behind ^^
Humor: 8/10=> I must admit it was kind of funny^^

Overall : good 1st submission. Just try to improve on sound, a little on graphics and time and also put a play control to make it perfect :)

not bad one

that was an alright animation and good efforts for a first animation. the graphics in this one were quite nice in this one and it had an alright concept to it. i think that this one could've been a little bit longer overall though, but it was still cool to watch. i also look forward to seeing more from this, it does have good potential.

Erm.....

ooooookay. this was sort of .... bad.

Firstly, you need a preloader. It sucks to hear sound but not see a damn thing until the movie's finished loading.

Even when I finished loading the movie, I watched it. In all honesty, I can see where you were going with it, but you really need some character development. You should take into account that everyone that sees your movie doesn't know anything about it, and you should give your production that kind of treatment.

We can't get into the heart of your action when we don't know your heart yet. Next time, plan what you're going to do before you do it.

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lol, nice. but the explosion was a little cheesy i have to admit.

freakin sweet.

Loved it.

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Nov 30, 2006
1:59 AM EST