AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!1
It was pretty cool.
Author Comments
This is my first official, more than 30 seconds, animation. I made it for chemistry class, as I had to do a flash related to the periodic table's patterns. So here it is my creation... Periodi City. I personally think it has a better plot than graphics...and I think many here will agree.
-I RECOMEND THAT IF THE "WORD BOXES" GO TO FAST FOR YOU TO READ THEM, THAT U STOP THE ANIMATION WHEN A WORDBOX POPS UP SO IT CAN BE MORE COMFORTABLE FOR YOU TO READ-
Cabroness!!!
cool one
that was an interesting animation. the idea and concept behing this animation was very original... and it really made this one good.
I eat cheese & jam- its cool!
Dragons & Spirits like weird food combinations and we support eduFlash, so its OK with me!
Periodicity fascinates me and you made a good effort. so much so I gave you a resonably good score, but you know its a mess.
the blue blocks of small letters are very hard to read, increase the contrast.
You need to tell everyone who the characters are at the end.
PJEskoria responds:
Ah! thanks!!! Good to know someone understands this is meant to be a type of eduflash! i thought of giving a more specific bio of each character at the end, but my due date was eating me up.
Piriodic Table of Elements should stay in class
too much reading, too much information, and the graphics could due with some work. i'm sorry to be so cold hearted caus i new this probably took u a while, but u should try and make the story line alot more fun and lees boring. oh also, please do keep in mind that science in a flash is like a cheese wiz and jam sandwich.
PJEskoria responds:
thanks alot for that :) though the flash is intended to be a bunch of information to be able to get a good grade lol
To tell you the truth...
the grafics don't matter if the the story's good. BUT the story won't matter if the grafics screw it up. Also you could've added some voice overs.
PJEskoria responds:
yep, the graphics are really basic. But I barely could find any time to do voice overs, sadly. My next animation shall be better since I wont have a due date as i had in this one. thanks for the review!