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I originally submitted this back in September, I then deleted about a month later and have since made it even better than before.
The bit with the guy dancing goes on for quite a while. But I assure you, the movie starts properly after that. Just stick with it.
LOL this was amusing especialy the guy dancing and the silly music, but it shouldnt last as long as it did, but for the mostpart it was entertaining. so nice work on the entertainment
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Reduce the singing guy abit
Silly start of the flash and such
The cheering and musical notes make me smile.
Obviously, this is a piss-take. I mean, 2 frames lasting 2 minutes and a minute of 'animation'?
I actually liked the crude drawings of the bus and the music notes. The high saturation and thick lines gave it a happy vibe.
Not worth paying attention to - specially given the start - but fun to have in the corner of a screen.
Good work, Afro.
But that guy had dancing fever, if you know what I mean! This was fun to watch... not really over the top, or bad. Just fun. WE WANT FUN!
It needs work but it is not bad.
To the person who wrote the review before me, you should tell what needs to be improved on. Don't be a meany nit-picker.
Ok, the graphics and artwork could use some improvement. And the guy dancing, that part really needs to be shortened up. Though I liked his hair... Also, the movie needs to "move" so to speak. The only movement I really saw were the scene switches and the crying and the dancing. Because of this, I'm guessing that you're still learning flash, correct? Good choice on music, though. I like songs like that.
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