It's alright

Try to work on you're drawings a little more man. But other than that it looked pretty intresting. Oh and sound didn't quite mix right when the helicopter started to shoot.

Decent teaser.

It's a shame that I can't seem to find the finished version, so I assume that you didn't do one.
Which is a shame, as this looked like it had something worthy of delivering to NG.

Oh well, the origin shows that you probably will never come through, too bad.

That was a good idia...

No comment :D

Make it longer

The graphics for it looked pretty decent. However, the lack of anything really going on there makes this a rather useless teaser. Perhaps something that lasts a few minutes would be better. I think it would be wise to give viewers a better idea as to what, exactly, is going on so they know whether or not the real deal is going to be worth the watch.

Another quick tip. Try to equalize your sound somehow. The balance between the volume of the music and the volume of the gunshots was horrendous. I ended up turning up my sound just to hear the music and could almost feel my ears bleeding when the gunshots kicked in.

Well....

looks to me like u decided to rip off the matrix, dont bother finishing this, it will only suck. If anybody sees this guy round, do me a favour, kick him in the balls.