umm.

its professional and all, but its not really effective, and it doesn't need to be on newgrounds....also, the bugs move WAY fast!

What?

Why is the score for this submission so low? I thought it was good, and ok maybe it isn't a full game or anything but that doesnt mean you just click zero and move on. Actually think about what you are rating instead of just clicking either zero or five i hate people who do that. It completely ruins the whole point of having a full rating system, Otherwise there would be two buttons; either you liked it or not.

Nice

It even looks professional! I totally agree with VagrantChick. It's too bad others don't think like her.

Great job.

ad neerrrrrr

nobody likes an ad flash, but it was okay.

Ad-awareness

Using NGR as a sound board for professional projects is a smart idea, like conducting your own market research. Reviewers should keep that in mind when scoring. (in the long run are not other game writers hoping to make it pro someday?)

It is a cute play on the other interactive ads that are already out there. Have you placed it against a variety of backgrounds? It contrasts well to Newgrounds, but might look washed out against a white or pale background. The "graduate debt free" in the bold logo on the left is a little hard to read, but that might be caused by an aging monitor. At first, it's a little hard to tell that it is a necktie around the 'R' but now that i recognize it, it's obvious. i don't know why i am giving it a 7 as opposed to an 8. Maybe the reminder of my own college debt makes me grouchy; in which case, the nature of the ad could be appealing to others in a similar situation.