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that was pretty kick-ass.
i hope you make more in the future.
Author Comments
This is my first flash. I didnt put a lot of time into it so it didnt come out as well as I had hoped, but its still pretty good!
MORE!
i love your style make more!
make lots more!
good job.
the music syncs up perfectly and animation is pretty good too. more entertaining than most of the animations on ng.
cool one
that was a pretty cool animation. the noir style to this one was pretty good... especially as a first animation. the idea to this one was also quite nice. you have some pretty good talents, i look forward to seeing more flashwork from you in the future.
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^^Good Points^^
Graphics were the best part in this. your drawings were pretty neat looking and I can tell you put some time into them and know what you are doing with the graphics. I liked how this was somewhat synced to the music, which was a good song.
^^Needs Improving^^
This really wasn't that exciting. You used a bunch of the same animations and scenes over and over again, which got boring pretty quick. Next time try to make new scenes, make the current ones shorter, and good stuff.
