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Lumus's Paddle Ball Exp.

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This video doesn't really make any sense because it is about a paddle ball from space, but it was for my senior project and I needed to come up with something quick. But here it is enjoy. But I havent really decided if im going to continue the story.

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^^Good Points^^
Good graphics, they were the best part about this. Good shading and good detail. Also good camera effects and realistic effects.

^^Needs Improving^^
Flashy graphics, but that seems to be about it with this movie. The storyline was decent at best. Nothing really happened and I'm surprised you didn't just continue with this in this episode instead of waiting to continue it. Since nothing really happened in this episode, I really don't feel like waiting around for the next episode.

It was ... meh

Like I said, it was meh. It didnt seem to have much of a point to it. The graphics were OK. I protected it none the less.

If there is a next time..

The smoke effects need to be cleaned up most, if you do decide to carry this out. Also, you might want to work on the whole, making sense bit, but as for character design, good job. Might I recommend some shading.

Nice work, Dev!

I'll try to be crucial in a friendly way. As awesome as it was man, some of the little things you gotta fix. For example, the Earth from space looked squashed a little. Or the TV had ebaumsworld's tag on the bottom right. Easy to clear up these kinds of things, and I know you tried your best at compression and it isn't always that easy. I'm not too good at compression either. Great musical choice and I like your art styles, and your production outro/loop w/e you wanna call it at the end was... to say the least, fantastic. Good work!

ToxicBunny-1 responds:

Thanks man, but this is not the end you will see even better content.

Good, but not great...

Ok for instance, this thing sucked. Seriously, but I can give you some credit for you're tweeings. But otherwise, no offense but that seriously didn't give much entertainmkent for the viewer. now as you can tell in my previouse I wasnt to mean and critical to others, but this time Im rating this as the viewer and not the animator.Good luck next time but it didnt realkly make much scence.

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3.59 / 5.00

Nov 22, 2006
1:04 PM EST