Nice for a beginner flash but yep pretty great
Funny. Kind of.
I had a chuckle. Still, you have teh awful grammers.
It was ok
You have great potential just next time, take you time and make it better animated and smoother.
The voice acting sucked-- Basically, get someone else to do it for you, and do it with a good mic until your voice breaks, the animation wasn't that smooth, the drawings were alright-- however a little sketchy and rough around the edges, but you have potential... Oh, and make sure you spell things right, too.