Cool animation !
Good animation and very good idees in the episode. The series is good.
I look how it will be go further.
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Kinda feel odd about submitting it again, but i think 100% of you will agree that its 1000 times better now...Enjoy it in its final form!!!
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"small explanation :O first ever"
The animation begins with a scene of joy.. life is normal and everything is going well.. A wanted criminal is relaxing against a wall, but is killed by a cowboy. Suddenly the world feels a sudden change.. It kinda feels to him that this scene was all part of a play... as soon as he discovers this the game is over, julia "girl in the orange suit" and the cowboy have to die.. more inportantly the girl.. the explosion was meant to kill her.. but she survived.. now the evil in this city despiratly needs to kill her as she has broken from the spell. she is almost lead to her death by a water fall but one of the "rats" becomes a traitor and saves her... Why did the gas masked guy save her from falling? Who is the transforming enemy, who took that petal at the beginning, who is the enemy and who is the good guy... all will be revealed further on in the series.
Oh yeah
I can definitely apreciate the enhancements here, it really adds a lot more to the mood and also makes it a much smoother transition to part two style wise. I know you did the two parts about two years apart, but even if it takes another two for part 3 please PM me when you release it.
No answers
This series has potential. I was about to watch the second episode, but realized I hadn't seen the first. If you have to explain the movie in text above than the movie was poorly set up (not trying to be harsh, but there you go). Hopefully the next episode will answer some stuff for me, otherwise nice animation.
So that was a she?
Seriously man. I really felt that the girl in the orange suit was a guy. Try putting in some shapes, maybe some breasts or/and female lines. Also, it's hard to feel the story if you don't read the description.
Otherwise, pretty nice ;)
AWESOMETASTIC
OMFG THAT ISSWEET animation skills 10/10 for that!!!