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'Textual Adventures'

Just a little flash I felt like making. Please watch THE WHOLE THING before you vote.

NOTE: Speaking with text was part of the theme, hence the name (why I didn't use voices). :)

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nice

Add preety colors!!!!!

Frenzy responds:

Thanks!

~ Z

(( NEAT IDEA ))

~~REVIEW~~
This was a neat idea with the whole "TEXT" as characters, i also like how you had some decent backrounds aswell, this is the sorta flash i wouldnt mind seeing more of like in a series, anyways nice idea and flash.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more characters like other types with numbers and such.

~~OVERALL~~
A neat flash with a neat idea behind it.

~X~

Frenzy responds:

Ha ha, maybe I will make this into a series!

Thanks!

.frenZy.

do more and polish

+++++ I love to see folk using text for pictures.

---- I think you maybe should've extended that into all the spikes/rock/chainsaw etc.

+++ Start of story was interesting, with kinda-shared name.

---- I found the second act of the story a bit tiresome and confusing. I didn't realise he was on about YuGiOh until he mentioned it. It didn't amuse.

-- ugly bg. where are they meant to be anyway? Poor drawings. The KM looks good for a tutorial to give some slight texture, but not for a movie.

+++ Various stock sounds used for comic effect were interesting.

+++ Great song to finish.

++ Lovely outlines on the stressed font.

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Interesting and kinda fun to watch.

I think you should do more and polish up your style! Tell more stories maybe? Try more things?

In any case, stay funky.

Frenzy responds:

---- I found the second act of the story a bit tiresome and confusing. I didn't realise he was on about YuGiOh until he mentioned it. It didn't amuse.

Oh, well you weren't supposed to trealize it was Yu-Gi-Oh unitl then. Anyway, thanks.

-- ugly bg. where are they meant to be anyway? Poor drawings. The KM looks good for a tutorial to give some slight texture, but not for a movie.

Yeah, the KoolMoves watermark is annoying, but what can I say? I only have the Demo! It was supposed to be an 'arena'.

Thanks for the great review!

.frenZy.

okay

it wasn alright animation. it had a good idea to it, but i think that some more could've been added to this one, or some of the dialouge could've been altered a little bit.

Frenzy responds:

Okay, thanks.

.frenZy.

K

^^Good Points^^
Quite an interesting concept to use words as characters to your movie. I thought the yu-gi-oh duel was a pretty funny idea too.

^^Needs Improving^^
A good idea, but poorly executed. The sound effects seemed really odd to put in, and you didn't use many sound effects where you could have. Something needs to be done in the beginning to make it more interesting. Music or sound effects or something.

Review Request Club :)

Frenzy responds:

Ok, thanks!

.frenZy.

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Uploaded
Nov 18, 2006
10:34 AM EST
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