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My First Sumission to get Front Page!
*yawn* Just getting some practice under my belt. If you don't know who the characters are, watch my other two cartoons (preferably the first one). Enjoy. WATCH ON MEDIUM OR LOW QUALITY!!!
ok why not smoke magic crack?
i mean if it gives you demonic powers come on. I'm not a drug user but if you can really get demonic powers from crack by god give me some!Anyway...the flash was great!
Demonic ain't worth shit, that God power's what u want
Don't smoke crack?!
Okay I loved the message at the end! Win!
Onto the review. You got me hooked right when the guy named Kain talked. I love all of their accents. You gave them personality by just in the way that they talked.
I loved this all together! I would say more but my friend, you already know!
You just got yourself a five! >.<
got yourself a new fan
This episode is what got me interested but your work all toghether is what got me hooked...your music choice together with the action is what's up...I can definitely see somethin like this on adult swim /toonami...keep up the good work
Thanx yo ^_^ always good to hear
This was a very original flash. I don't think the concept of "magic crack" has really been put onto paper, or in your case, flash. While I certainly like other qualities of your flash, it gets the most on creativity in my book. As a fellow artist, I understand how hard it is to be fresh nowadays.
As for the animation, it is done well. The jumping and the backward running were good animations, but you might want to work on your string-of-events animations. When Jazz stabbed the guy he just kind of fell; no slipping from the catwalk or pushing or anything else logical.
The voiceovers were well done and made me feel like these were real people talking. My only problem was the whole "theres no getting out of this deal" part. It was kind of cheesy.
With the bios, many people are too stupid and lazy to read that much and will resultingly miss much of your backstory which has alot of potential. If you put this to flash, it could perhaps be enought to make a whole series. You might want to go into detail with what power, sould, skill and stealth mean as well.
You have alot of potential, as you have your own unique style wich is rare when flash has been done for so long. If you work on your fight scenes and show us the actual fights insead of just the afterefects, you could certainly be one of the best aritsts on Newgrounds.
Thanx cuz,and I know what you mean about the bios, considering I've put myself into a stalemate with them. I was going to make some minor changes to the story but I've deleted the .FLAs for ep.1 and ep.2 and can't take out the old profile/story etc. I just put them there originally so that people would have somethin' to do while the movie loaded. Regardless, your advice helps out alot, thanks man ^_^ And I will work on the fights
--- text in pre-loader is hard to read against whiter parts of gradients.
++ Some sumptuous script fonts.
--- Jazz is battling against Kia/Dante, contrary to what the bios suggested.
++ Pumping machinery is a great spot effect.
+++ Lovely lighting on characters.
++ Great, clean, fairly stylish, vectors for characters.
----- Only one mouth shape for characters. They look like muppets!
--- Some elements look slightly disjointed, like the bubble that emerge or the characters' movement. (The latter mostly looks OK, apart from in a couple of scenes.)
Overall, I found the movie somewhat unsatisfying in its plot.
The art was generally sweet on the eye though.
Jazz isn't battling against Kia and Dante, he's fighting Kain, man. Pay attention
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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