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This was made just over a week, and im wanting some feedback please. It's a trailer for a movie that wont be made(dont ask why i made it...)
Thanks.

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K

^^Good Points^^
A well done movie, no doubt. Though the coloring looked a little unprofessional, the animations were above average. You did a lot of small animations and they were pretty life-like too. I had to laugh at the "NOOOO" towards the end of this, that was pretty funny. Overall, the sound effects were great in this and well placed.

^^Needs Improving^^
You said coming soon, but I don't get it. I thought this movie pretty much wrapped things up quite nicely. What else could you add to this?

heh

coming soon?! Wasnt that the entire movie!?

lol

Heh...

Maybe you should put more detail before you submit it, because honestly... that was crap.

I didn't like this at all

I don't mean to come across as rude, and forgive me if I am (I have nothing but respect for people who can even make these movies), but I didn't really see the point of it. It wasn't really funny. It had absolutely no story, and the graphics were very substandard. Maybe there's something I'm not getting but I found it pointless. The only constructive criticism I can offer is to never make another flash movie like this again.

:-/

The graphics were actually decent and u had a good smooth style... u just need to focus more on making ur person. its looks like a child made them only because its 3 dots (eyes and nose) and line for mouth. thats my main complaint. spend some time making ur perople and i think that u will have some pretty good flashes.