Well I seen your other work, but this one seems (or at least to me) to be have been a little better then the first one you submitted. I must say for a starting animator you got some skill, and if you keep animating you will go far. Everything was fairly decent, graphics, animation, etc. Also I found the voice quality much better. Plus if I may add all your jokes and humor are great! I can possibly see this becoming a good series, if you keep working on it. Above all nice job.
Well as I said before the characters are still a little plain. Maybe if you could try and draw them like that one guy in the "flamers" group it would be much better. Also the mouth animation was done well but kind of a little off when they are speaking, you should try to work on that. But nice work, keep it up!