The Real Rubyrulez 13

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This is episode #13 of my Web Series, titled "The Real Rubyrulez."

Synopsis: When a science experiment goes horribly wrong, resulting in a mutated egg monster, it's up to Rubyrulez to save the day! (or not.) Meanwhile, a mysterious stranger comes to town to point out the show's flaws, and share his famous lemon square pastries with everyone.

Note: If you are planning on saying something mean, please keep it to yourself. I'm nothing more than an amateur animator, so if you don't like it, give me some helpful advice, but please don't be mean about it.



=Good Points=
Haha a very well done flash I must say. I did indeed laugh through the whole thing. You had some great jokes and humor in there my friend. But everything was done decent, Animation, sounds, graphics/drawings, etc. But above all good job, keep it up!

=Bad Points=
The characters in the flash were pretty plain and dull, you should try updating them. Making them more realistic and have more features to them. The sound/voice quality wasn't the best and you should also try and fix that. Lastly you should try and make more movement in the animation, also make it much smoother. Fix those and you should have a better turnout then what you did here. Good job though!

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rubyrulez responds:

Now this is the type of review I'm looking for. Telling me what was done right, what was done wrong, and how I can fix it to make it better. Kudos to you, sir.

pretty cool

dude, this flash was pretty good. I enjoyed the plot, and it was pretty funny, you should do more of these soon.

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Didn't think it was all that great. Nice use of the Punk-O-Matic, though.


rubyrulez responds:

What wasn't so great about it? Please be specific, and include advice for improvement next time.

Funny People Chesey lines

liked it. not enough Graphcs I Can Draw better than that on my cpu
But i still thought it was funny!!!

rubyrulez responds:

I'm glad you liked it. I usually go for humor in my flashes, it just sucks that graphics make up 99% of what makes a flash enjoyable.

Best one so far!

Once again amazing job, Ruby. A masterpiece, and totally the best one out of the bunch!

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2.74 / 5.00

Nov 14, 2006
11:51 PM EST
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