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very short ghost flash

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Nov 13, 2006 | 1:59 PM EST

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ok so this is like my first FBF animation I've submitted to NG as the title explains, it's very short so it won't take up too much of your time XP Hopefully if I get some good feedback on this I'll be makin and submitting more stuff (much to your horror ^^; ) anyway, I do hope you enjoy this little short cartoon.



Rated 2 / 5 stars

A nice start.

This was a good first flash but some improvements can be made like it could be longer and have some better sound. But anywho nice try and keep on doin' your thing


Rated 0 / 5 stars

good job

good job you have just made the worst flash ever.

plebanshiren responds:

aww thank you so much, I'm glad your jelouse of my awesome flash making skills XP


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not so bad....

Fairly well animated but the timing seemed to be a little out.
I liked it.

plebanshiren responds:

Yar I know, I'll try and fix it soon ^^; thank you ^^


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I Just Didn't See A Point

Well I have to agree it was very short but usually even shorts have a point or at least they can throw something funny into it.

plebanshiren responds:

Well this was really just a test to see if I could actually do a FBF animation, the "humour" that's in it was kinda thrown in to make it that little less boring. But have no fear the next flash I submit will be alot longer and funnier.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

good try

well, it wasn't quite what I was expecting. Next time you make something, give it a bit more of a story. Or, if it's going to be short, make it funnier, like a one liner. Good expression in the characters face, and overall, not too bad for a first try.

plebanshiren responds:

thank you^^ I will be sure to uplaod something funnier than this soon, and longer too XP