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The Car And Stapler

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Hi, this is my first stopmotion animation, tell me what you think. I know it is short and i probly won't ever do a stopmotion again but i just wanted to see what you guys thought of it.

Song= Keep Your Eyes Peeled by The Automatic

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good

liked it, and was well done, but as MarcyVF says, you've done better

• Not one of your best •

This wasn't very good.
No soun FX, kinda' no plot or storyline.
But good animation and smooth graphics.
You must have used some time on that.
Stick to Flash.

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Nice animation overall.

• M •

cool one

that was an alright stopmotion.... a nice change too, i haven't seen too many stopmotions on NG in quite a while... good to see. the idea was a little bit random, but your efforts were very nice and a good choice of audio too.

K

^^Good Points^^
This was one of the better stopmotion movies I've seen submitted lately. You showed some skill in this, like having the stapler fly through the air. Also, you had a lot of good camera angles, and every animation was smooth.

^^Needs Improving^^
At one point towards the end there seems to be a pile of books or papers that suddenly appears on the couch. Little stuff like this always need to be improved. Also, there really wasn't a great storyline in this. The ending was kind of lame.

Not bad.

This is probably one of the smoothest stop-actions I've ever seen. Awsome for a first try. Hope to see some more out of you.

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2,674
Votes
12
Score
4.13 / 5.00

Uploaded
Nov 11, 2006
6:10 AM EST