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This is my first real solo flash. It is about a minute long, and the song is "Ode to Angels" by Milkman-Dan from the audio portal.

December 2009:
It's been three years since I've made this. I can't believe that I made it when I was only 16. I really am struck by how long its been since I've put anything up like this on this site. I think I may have another version of this project in the works, and hopefully I'll be able to see how much I've improved. Thank you for still watching it today.

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It was sweet

While you don't seem to be that experienced in flash, this was pretty good simply because of how cute it was. I was thinking it would be a Valentine's Day centered thing, as that's what I have been watching lately. You showed nice little things that go on in everyday life. The things in the cartoon moved well and flowed with each other. The choice of music was nice as well. If you put in some more variety (meaning putting more things in it) it could be much better.

this was gud

bu it was an old flaash software so mabay u could do it agen on a more modern 1 and makeit longer by adding more kwl "little drawings"

cool one

a little bit short, but that was a pretty interesting animation. the graphics in this one were quite good, a decent idea to it and it offered some good entertainment.
nice work.


^^Good Points^^
This was very good. I'm pretty sure that you did everything FBF, please confirm that for me. Your animations were quite smooth and your drawings were simplistic but pretty cure as well. This had humor in it, and the music in it really set a happy mood to it.

^^Needs Improving^^
Of course some drawings could be improved, as with every movie, but overall a good movie in a lot of ways.

mademoiselle responds:

Yes it was FBF, it's my favorite way to animate. I will work on the drawings seeing as one can only hope to improve with each new project. Thanks you for taking the time to review my submission and give constructive crisitism.

Very Well done.

=Good Points=
The flash had a nice touch to it, it was very sweet and sensitive. Very nice indeed, I enjoyed all the "love" going on in it. But if was nicely done the aniamtion was fairly good, aswell the graphics and drawings. Nice FBF my friend, keep it up.

=Bad Points=
Well, it was a decent flash, and although it was frame by frame next time you should put more detail into your drawings. They were done well don't get me wrong, but could use some work. Nice job though, very nice indeed.

mademoiselle responds:

I will definitely work on improving my drawings with the next flash. It's reassuring that most people are saying the same thing about things to work on. I appreciate the postive comments and critism.

Credits & Info

4.21 / 5.00

Nov 9, 2006
6:41 PM EST
Music Video

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