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Herve's new book is explored in a Book Club meeting with Oprah, David Hasselhoff and Gary Coleman.
I wouldn't say it's the end of the world.But theres indeed lots of improvement you gotta do.
1.Slightly poor graphics(Thats slightly okay,but if you want quality stuff,you know what i mean.)
2.Funny plot(I don't know what this whole thing is about.)
3.I don't think somebody would read a story outside a house,would she?She might as well go in,sit down,have some coffee and say the story at the same time.
4.Adults listen to stories too?That looks like a children's book,you know.
5.You can do some "walking" actions to make this look nicer.
6.Try adding some voices.
i only wish i could vote with negative numbers
add some motion, and sound, and voices......and plot
i didnt like this at all. you could atleast add some sound to it. or some voices.
Yeah, I'll be having voices/music in my next movie. this was my first attempt at a movie. Learned alot putting it together. I have a few characters that I will do voices for.
Was meant more to be a moving comic book than a cartoon.
To make even funnier you should put sound to it.
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Goofy dies. Sora cries.
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