Strong animation weak story
I'm a huge fan of your work. Your animation style and cinematography are amazing. I'd be sad to see you work so hard on something that looks so much like a cheezy clone of "V for Vendetta" mixed with Spawn. It was completely lacking the one element in your other work that was so great. The Humor! I think you are a very talented animator. Concentrate your strengths and don't try to stretch yourself out too thin over too many different crafts. You'll wind up proficient at all and master of none.
Take Adam Phillips (brakenwood) for example. Amazing animation but there really is no story there. The characters are so amusing because of how incredible the animation is. he knows his strengths and uses them perfectly.
Smooth, beautiful, gripping. I loved every second of it. I really hope you come through with this and create it. Keep the quality up! I wouldn't mind only having a single episode a month at this quality, rather than more frequent mediocre episodes.
I really liked the whole cinematic feel of it and the art style is really interesting. I would definitely like to be a voice actor for this toon just cause I wouldn't have enough time to animate this toon and my own projects.
Awesome pilot man, I love you're animation and music(especialy the Chronic Dialing Syn[drom?] I believe I can help do some stuff. I canhelp with music/sounds, animation, and story writing if necissary. Email is email@example.com if you're interested.
PS I haven't any NG submissions because I can't view the submit page for some reason, If you happen to be wondering.
that was truely awsome.
i loved it.