Lost me...completely and totally.
The graphics were bad; it was just entirely hard to follow.
The fighting didn't look at all good. I mean, I couldn't tell what they were trying to accomplish! It looked like two sticks with arms and legs and a ball stuck on the top, just toppling over one another.
The camera spin has been done by other flash artists, and you weren't even close. You tried to reach for a cool visual that was way out of your league. I suggest not attempting it until you get your feet firmly planted into the idea of making Flash movies.
The "violence" I didn't understand. I hear a gun shot, and next thing I know, I'm looking at a street and a building? Sorry, but graphically, this was crud.
If you were going to do a fight scene, stick with it from front to end. You tried to enter a storyline into it and failed, then you entered in awful graphics that flashed by too fast to be really seen!
Also, Preloader! I can't stress that enough! It starting while still downloading only throws the "enjoyment" out the window. Use Preloaders from here on out.
Add to that, some of the sounds really weren't helpful, especially for the fight, because again, the graphics didn't add up.
Just keep working at it, you'll get something done. But until you do get something down that looks good, then post it on NG, don't just post everything you finish; give yourself time to develop and learn new things before posting something to share with everyone, because stuff like this isn't entertainning, and sometimes hearing criticism doesn't help ones ego.