You are amazing

Twas enchanting

Yes but no

Such a great beginning, please dont waste it. Yes its OK and deserves to stay for now, but you KNOW it could be so much better. PLEASE do the whole video in time for next year.
Yes, do as I do and work on it for resubmission. People don't mind if it is fully improved.
As it is its not up to that much, and I don't like hearing that Benny Hill tune on anything but comic chase scenes- thats what its for, its how Benny Hill used it. It could make the collection if you continue at that standard.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Oh dear...

As the reviewer before me said it did have a good start, the fbf boy was good and the talking ghost was spectacular, i wanted to get an entry in by halloween but couldnt so i didnt submit it. The end bit could have been funny but a) its a music video so you can't get away with it b) it could have been something silly or just random! You seem to have gotten away with it however. This couldn't have gotten the score it did. Sorry but that's what I think. Goodluck in the future. Maybe make a Christmas music video now? Beane.

Dissapointing

I thought your animation style and drawing style were good. I also like the concept of a soundtrack filmclip. The movie started off promising and I really was dissapointed when the cheap freeze frame come up.

This really should have been finished, even if it was submitted late it really could have gone somewhere. My advice in future is finish your works, your only cheating yourself cuttting it short like this.

sucks you didnt finish in time.

I think you should still finish it though. it looked pretty sweet.