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I made this tinny tiny short in a day but thought it was alright to submit it.
What im looking for is reviews with good criticism on how to inprove next year.
Eh I guess it could be worse. Nothing really wowed me if anything but it's just kinda there to pass time
um well, idk
This was kinda good an the black and white made it look old and good but heres somethings to work on as well.
1 make it longer, even though it is called haloween short, still its short.
2 Characters dont make much movement, dont just make it longer, add more frames cause it doesnt have many pictures, and just as a fact i learned, ive seen lieke 20 submissions called halloween short so you dont have a large chance of having this kept, but ya your art is ok and it has, like i earlier said a kind of, well old look like as if you movie was made 30 years ago. ty nice start to flash
Good for something that took a day
Here's some stuff:
1) give your characters necks so they don't look so slouchy.
2) make it longer, needs more of a plot
3) big spelling error: "REPLAY"
Shorts don't need preloaders
although personally I would use one these days because
a people expect one these days
b its easy to down load the NG one
c admin likes us to use the NG one, especially their special day one. like the Halloween one- it identifies it as an NG sub.
Replay not reply, thats a different word.
put in a rectangular hit area in your buttons otherwise people click on the button area and miss the text and it doesnt work. PM me if you have any difficulty.
i liked the grey scale style with the grey lines...it looked pretty cool. the music also realy set the mood. but sorry dude...i blam anything without a pre-loader. it's a shame, this was cool... :(
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