Not so good
Stick to your games for a while, they're more entertaining at the moment.
The spelling and speech were really bad. Get someone to voice act for you if you don't have a mic or you're too young to sound normal on a mic.
Try animating the characters yourself, if you don't like the outcome, you can always just try again.
The humor was pretty boring, dumb character-styled stuff is getting really old, unless the jokes are very clever.
I hope you'll pay attention to this review and learn from it. Keep trying and you'll get good!
OMG that is sooo damn funny!!5/5!One of my favourites!