Good Start

Nice

Sh!T YEA

that is so good, i cannot believe that you could possibly just make all that story up! the only thing that you need is to have the ppl in there talkin, you did habdle the subtitles well though. if u need a voice actor, i can help , lol, anywayz, i and hoping to see more when you get round to it

Quite good

well i saw it when it was half done and i was impressed....
now that ive seen it finished im even more impressed.
considering its your second flash animation.
im all HOLY SH*T.
very good though.
keep em' coming

cool one

that was a pretty unique and interesting animation you got here, though to me, it seemed like a large portion of this one was describing Ritomikku Kage and not much of a flash. the description of Ritomikku Kage was very interesting and carries huge potential. if this one was intended as a trailer/teaser, then it was perfect.... otherwise more could've been done to it. either way, it was still good.

Decent start

Graphically, this was fairly decent. I'm not a huge fan of the anime style, but you drew it reasonably well, and it obviously fits it with the setting of the movie.

If you wanted to improve this however, I'd set a bit more into story instead of just a fight scene. The concept of the Ritomikku Kage intrigued me, but in the movie all you really did was show someone becoming one and a fight. Personally, I'd like to know more about them. So I'd recomend in the next one of these you do, or if you remake this one, explaining a bit more about the Ritomikku Kage.

One final thing I'd like to adress is that the text at the beginning. For me it's fine to read. But for others I can easily it being a problem. Maybe you could make it more interesting by having someone narrate what's being said with backgroudnt hat's relevant to what's being said.

E.g. For the bit about people being arressted show a scene of the police arressting people.

2/5