+As an writer as well as a Flash author I understand this. I liked some of the humourous ideas and details, like the sprite talking only in text and the first time the ball hit him.
The animation wasn't great, but it was OK.
The text was poor. It needs checking through for spelling, grammar etc.
If you want I could go through the whole lot in detail for a tiny mention in the credits!
The sound quality of the voice acting was poor except the girl, who sounded fine. cc's sound quality was the worst. I think the voices were ok, just the quality.
Ice Dragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits
proof watch it before you submit
some of the subtitles didnt match and words got stucktogether !
Ill check it out.