i didn't get it.
i don't get what it really has to do with the storyline at the start... but anyway.. The graphics were mostly bad, but some were quite good proving that you are a capable artist, so take more time on the art. The animation was minimal really - try doing some more. The sound was quite annoying and you of added sound effects at some points and the 'plot' (as in what it says at the start) is a little corny - but maybe its meant to be like that, i didn't like it and i 0'd but you should still finish and submit the finished thing.