Dread's Advocate Pt. 1

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Naftali Piotrowski (I think Naftali means "struggling") was a Deputy GI of the Israeli Special Forces who was commissioned to protect a small village in Palestine from an agressive militia. However, he failed to protect any of the villagers and lost all of his comrades, including one who happened to be his older brother. With a great feeling of dread and guilt on his shoulders, his life would become in even more danger.
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Yea Boiii!!!!

Yo i like the movies the animation is great!


It starts off great, love the backgrounds, the drawing style and the animation. The music was great, there seemed to be a little lack of sound effects through out, but the feel of the music made it fine. In the end, the fightscene was ok, a little surreal, as was the entire movie which is O.K. The rap/hip-hop music did seem a little out of place, but some of the lyrics fit, which was good. What I suggest is working on making some clearer sentences, and trying to give clearer messages in your animation. However you are totally in command of your style which is very refreshing.

keep up the good work my friend.

Nice job

Worth watching, the only thing i noticed is that some of the words in the subtitles were spelled wrong.

TheoryFilms responds:

Well, damn, it looks like I did spell a few words wrong. Thanks for pointing that out.

WOW this one is actually worth watching!

this was great but theres always room for improvement!ill be sure to look out for your work!

Nice piece of work you are making.

This was actually a good flash in my opinion, though some things ruined the whole feel of the flash.

If you are going to have any more fight cutscenes, don't insert in music like that. It pretty much ruined the feel the flash was giving, I would have suggested punch sound effects, and if you could, some better graphics.

I really like where your storyline is heading. I'll be sure to look out for more of your work!

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3.63 / 5.00

Oct 8, 2006
10:15 PM EDT
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