Some interesting music used in this. I guess I'd honestly rather watch a Flash movie, even of this quality than hear a speech or Powerpoint, so it's good in that respect.
Watching it on NG doesn't really seem practical though. First the credits were incredibly long, longer than most Hollywood movies. Aside from that, right after that I was bombarded by text. Boring.
Doesn't fit Newgrounds.
It wasn't bad for a school project and all, but sadly, it's just really boring as an NG submission. The intro with Mario just took longer than it should've been. Most of the visuals and text flashed around so much it was hard to tell what was going on. I'm sorry to say this, since it's kinda neat, but this is better off as a Powerpoint or something, not a Flash.
Thats cool, Thanks
I hope you didn't get an A.
From a teacher's perspective, that was entirely uneducational. From what I could tell you did nothing but plot summary, and on top of that, even if you HAD written something that might have classified as 'good', you didn't give anyone time to read it - out loud or to themselves. The text was small and went by too quickly, the pictures were annoying, there were spelling errors, and the looping five-second clip that played throughout the presentation was at best horribly annoying. I wanted to smash it in. As a teacher I'd say you get a C-, simply because you can at least tell that you took maybe five minutes to slap this together, but as a voter, I'd say you're lucky that I gave you a 2.
Well...1. You dont know what the project was all about
2. It took me the whole afternoon because, im not very good at flash
3. We're stoppig the flash presentation during certain parts so people cann read them i just didnt put control buttons because i dont know how to do that either
Johnys Awesome Review
You spelt presentation wrong.
That sucked. At the beggining, they showed those images of who made it for to long. Then during the actual movie, the images were to small and you didn't show the text long enough!