okay...

well, it did have a nice idea to this one, but the animation itself was rather poorly done. either you didn't try hard on this one, or you're still learning flash. it was okay to watch, but i think that it really could've been better overall.

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I can normally deal with a poorly animated film if there is some sort of plot, or vice versa - but when the animation is so simple and the plot of the movie just does not seem to understandable, I do not know what to say. I think that some explanation of what is happening on the train with the characters would work. Perhaps give the characters some dialouge or show some text as to help with the outline of the plot. The audio was not bad, it helped the movie along.

ry

watched a few seconds and quit

that was rearly bad improve both the flash and make the beggining drag the viewer in keeping in mind people watch these small rubish ones mainly for a quick blam, drag the viewer in dont have a baddly scribbled title which looses intrest before the flash starts

Amazing

You know, this really surprised me.

I thought the tacky, hand-drawn title screen with the fade would automatically qualify this movie as really really bad. The stick figures didn't help either.

But the sound and the story really saved it. I got into the flash and even thought the drawings were matching pretty well. You made thin, black lines look half-way decent.

This only shows that you got talent with this.

Good luck with that~

Violent much? =P

It was alright...
There are some definite signs that show that you could become better with a lot of practice. Just keep trying.
Also, I don't think that the black and white style contributed to your idea at all... somthing to keep in mind.
Other than that, everything seemed too 'perfect;' it was all made up of straight lines and perfect circles -- didn't really help you =/
Again, just practice for a year or two and you will get better.