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Happy Birthday ZekeySpaceyLizard
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Happy Birthday Zekey! :D
Sound quiet in parts. I reccommend turning up your speakers.
Sound UP
The graphics were alright and make the lip sync look better. There was hardly any animation so add some of that. The sound; szzzz that's where you went bad. It was way too low. I couldn't hear crap. Also, make like a robber come into the birthday party and Zekey kills him or something. Make some violence and some humor. For humor, you can make Zekey have a heart attack when he gets hit with the "SURPRISE!" That'll get a chuckle out of some people
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Did'nt like it.
The sound is messed up, I can hear the music because it is TOO loud. I didn't hear a word anyone said since the voices are to quiet. The graphics need a go-over and then you'll be good to go!
nope.
The sound is your biggest problem, yes indeed. I had to play it again to hear the overused and shitty joke. The poorness of your voices wouldnt have been such a problem if there wasnt such a big contrast with the other sounds. I had to turn the sound way up to hear it and then my speaker almost exploded.
Sucks.
What makes me even angrier is that the review average is still pretty decent, I dont remember the NG audience being so mellow on me when I first submitted my shit here (which, in retrospect, helped, aim to improve n all).
I saw your Clock Day movie aswell, and I didnt like it that much either, but at least that shows small signs of hope. Hang in there, maybe notify me when you get something new and better up.
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MetalDart responds:
Well, thanks for being honest at least. Instead of just giving it a low score, I'm glad that you were brutally honest.
The whole Flash was made in a day. The voices, the characters, etc. I guess I was too anxoius to release it, and didn't work as hard as I wanted to.
I know the sound was bad, and I know the joke was overused. I just wanted to make something that I could enjoy and hopefully make others laugh as well.
As for the average, the main score of about 1.8 (as of now), is pretty low. And the review average, is higher than expected. Mostly because of the fact that people either wanted to wish Zekey a happy birthday, know me, or thought it was alright.
Thanks for all the criticism. I have seen you around and would really like to improve with Flash. If you ever feel like helping me out, be my guest.
Thank you for being the only one who gave me this tough love and insightful review. :)
Nice little flash.
Short and sweet. And for such a small filesize, it was actually pretty good. Above average graphics, pretty funny, and I always enjoy hearing that "The Price Is Right" lose sound. :)
Review seems a tad short.....
adsfadfgjkhaadsfg
That's better. :D
MetalDart responds:
Yeah. I relly enjoy the Price is Righ song as well.
Thanks for the great review Tannerite!