I don't quite get it, but I liked it.
Good sound, good graphics, and really well-seamed together.
One little thing? In that context, it should be"nobody's."
But good job, and keep 'em coming.
Cheers for the picking up that little mistake, I will update it soon. Thanks for the good review!
...And the moon was obliterated, thus dooming all tidal-dependant life on the earth!!
It started with a unique air, and maintained that same style throughout the film. It was consistent.
- The dialouge was piquing.
- Interesting use of symbolism.
- Peaceful music. :)
One little thing in there I noticed was that one of your foreground elements on the moon disappeared before it left the stage. But that's just tiny beans!
- Work on your animation skillsets and artwork (landscapes, mostly)
Keep up this style you've got going on! People seem to like it. ;)
Some good tips, thanks! I'll look into the moon thing, that probably happened because I was working with such big graphics and couldn't see the outline of the stage (will be fixed).
I know that plot wasn’t to very deep but I was trying new things, test effects etc. A chill out clip came to mind so I made it, the music was what really started my off :)
This was only my second flash so there will defiantly be things that I need to work on, thanks for the advice!
I can't say why but it moved me. It reminded me of myself in younger days. Never lose that vision of yours, it will help you more than you may know.
I'm pleased it did that, that moves me too. To make someone feel like that has to be better than getting a good score! Thank you, I will never lose my vision.
well man when u made that u were depresed lol..
not bad in fact i like the animation but i hated the sound sorry but i have to said that jajaja... man the sound was that anoying that reached center of my brain... and... w.....t.....f.... dont worry lol really i like that keep making things like that....
Thanks but it's too bad that you didn't the music; I thought it was really relaxing and people I have shown previously like it also. I found it on the Newgrounds Audio Portal and hadn't been used in any submission before so I thought I would steal the chance. Anyway thank you I spent a bit of time on it and I appreciate this good review.