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Noir City Teaser Trailer

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This is a trailer for a project I'm thinking of committing to.

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Don't use the brush tool for cities

Its good, I like the voice, but don't use the brush to make the skyscrapers. Use the pen tool, and make it that way.
Seems like a decent story atleast, hopefully its really good. I'm just not fond of the graphics.

It really shouldn't of been but it was funny

That was funny. Really funny. You can tell it was made to be serious, though. I think partly the characters don't look good enough, or tuned rather to the style of movie you're trying to make. Obviously very Sin City.

Directing: 7/10
Sound directing: 6/10
Originality: 4/10

Overall you get a 7. I look forward to it.

it's ok....

Not the best I've seen graphics-wise but the idea seemed ok, not original but stylish all the same

yea...

Seems interesting... I say do an episode or whatever and see how people react to it, then decide from there...

Trailer?

This isn't Hollywood where you have to make trailers or whatnot for some piece of Flash animation, nobody is going to "anticipate" what someone is releasing unless they expect the person to have something really badass. You ought to have made an entire animation rather than a lot of talking accompanied by a few loops of some dude's jacket blowing in the wind. Not that you have to make a whole animation, I'm assuming nobody is paying you to do this, and this is obviously just for fun.

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Score
2.93 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 30, 2006
1:04 AM EDT