okay

the action in this one was pretty cool, but it needs some better graphics, audio and some sort of plot behind it and not just random fighting or killing. randomness is always fun to watch, but if it has a concept behind it, then it makes it much more enjoyable to watch.

GOOD BUT

I WAS TOO SHORT PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER AND THERE ARE MORE STICKS FIGHTING AND IT IS LONGER.

Fuck yeah, finish it!

If you finish this and submit it, then it could even make front page! Hell, I'm impressed with this! Probably because of the hordes of shitty stick movies that flood the portal.

Nice ana, but...

Good anamation, but it was too short. use the NG Alpha section when you want to ask questions about wetiher or not you should contuniue.

Add.

Add this to whatever your making. well put together. i guess.