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nice style, more voices would have been cool
I think the pacing needs to be worked on. The premise is acceptable, but the delivery needs work. I think the tongue in cheek jokes would be laugh out loud if you could get rid of the misplaced pauses (not the awkward ones). Just polish it up and you'll be golden!
Dude, I think I just learned something...
That was a half decent start at making a flash movie. The plot was awful. And your voice acting needs a lot of work, but the premise was okay. You should have added music (something campy from the era of public service annoucements). I know you did this for school but remeber there are more drawing tools in Flash than just line. Try to put a little more effort into your artwork. Also, your movie felt like you were making it up as you drew it. Try to work on a script before making the movie. It will give you better flow and gives you the ability to add humour (which was barely clinging to life in this movie).
this is like profesor bor-ing... man that was a really slow movie...
but... well i dont know its not my tipe of flash.. or really that wasnt what i expect while i was dowloading the movie i mean... for a 56 kb user thats a nightmare to downlad something bad and heavy... but tell to your friend or for u i dont know... that is a good work but not that maybe i expected.. but is good.. c ya..
I'll be sure to pass on those words of praise.
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Home of all things non-educational and this is clearly educational.... and kina slow.
I feel it kind of stupid to have to point out the many flash tutorials by Tom and Wade... And if you didn't want to see something educational, next time, read the comments.